Thursday, January 22, 2009

Feminism

Oh, boy. If I thought male-domination was something I had to conquer before, then this class was certainly giving me a run for my hard-earned money. I was standing in the middle of the high-school gym, running my fingers over my skirt and hoping there were no wrinkles. It was my first JROTC uniform inspection. Throughout the swarm of green uniforms all standing in perfect formation, I was the only one wearing a skirt and the only one with tiny feet. Out of thirty cadets, I was the only girl. I won't lie, it was a terrifying process being drilled on our knowledge and having our uniforms examined by our instructor who was over-zealously searching for any and all errors. I had studied my heart out and had let none of my fellow male cadets help me, even if every single one had (eagerly) offered. I would sink or swim, but either way, I was doing it on my own. My uniform was nearly immaculate, just one small error, but my knowledge was perfect. I flawlessly answered each of the inspectors questions while the boys around me gave the generic "I don't know" response. I felt entirely proud of myself. Miss Independent. So, even if they razzed me about being the only skirt and called me "Little Foot" for a month because of my tiny shoe size, I had done it by myself. But, I think the greatest thing of all was that they were still there to catch me if I fell.

So, the above being my scene involving aspects of feminism, the following will be the reflection on Will Baker's Feminism. I found the piece to be very well-written, short and clever. Aspects of feminism don't need to involve educated woman at political rallies or hard-core, engrained beliefs, but can be as simple as girls doing things on their own, like Montana. She has no idea what feminism is, nor will she understand it for several years to come, but the attitude that she doens't always need assistance bolsters her feministic qualities and creates a witty story to boot.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Jess! It's great to meet you and read your writing. And of course, we'll have to read this book of yours when it comes out! Congratulations! In this piece, I love the specificity of your description, and the vivid sense of voice and character. As far as practicing scene-writing goes, a reader can certainly feel that they are there with you! "Feminism" is a great title for this piece. A great start to the semester's work. Thanks, Jess.

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  3. Hey Jess! Like Professor Patel mentioned, I also enjoyed the detail and description in your first post. I think the reader is able to feel your sense of accomplishment when you passed inspection. I would've liked to hear what inspired you to join JROTC, and also the reaction of the males in the program when they first saw you, whether there was any resistance or not. I really enjoyed your story, I look forward to read more of your work.

    Ali Z.

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  4. Hello Jess, I’m Mercedes!
    I appreciated the intro to your blog more than you know. As a woman I could relate to your story and felt a kind of kinship with you while I was reading. I also admired your willingness to show the reader your vulnerability in that moment. The one thing I would have like to know more about was the instructor, I felt maybe his or her intimidation aspect would have been really great. All in all I thought it was a well written piece about feminism.
    ~Mercedes~

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  5. Amazing story. I compeletely admire your bravery, even if you felt at that time in your life that you weren't; you were. You are a talented writer and I found myself wanting to read more when the story ended. As a woman, it is nice to know that there are stronger women out there to stand up for our rights, even if it's in the smallest ways. I applaud you and truly can't wait to read more!

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